The Shining, 9/29/17, 87%, B+, 4.5 Stars.
-Is it well paced? 6/10, No.
-Did it make sense? 8/10, Yes.
-Were the main ones relatable? 7/10, Yes.
-Were the main ones well developed? 7/10, Yes.
-Was it clear? 10/10, Yes.
-Is everything there for a reason? 9/10, Yes.
-Did it convey the appropriate emotion(s)? 10/10, Yes.
-Was it used appropriately? 10/10, Yes.
-Was the humor appropriate, and did it work well? 10/10, Yes.
-Were there few, if any unnecessary/uncalled-for profanities? 10/10, Yes.